Tuesday, August 16, 2011

Do you think my poems are any good?

theses are my poems that i came up with by myself tell me what you think. (1) summers end another friend my heart still aches with pain days go on im moving on from the pain i feel within. (2)not i lay him next to me an armed souldier he shall be so little and fragile he might seem to be but big and strong he is to me.(3)the sweet sound of a mothers voice calms the child as there is no other noise the wind is blowing the birds are chirping the black cat is in the bushes lirking he see's the baby just lying there green eyes and long brown hair. well that was it please tell me what you think and if you lke them i came up with all of them by myself :) .thank you

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